Formative Feedback

I shared my plans for my 3 briefs and my discourse diagram and scenario during the formative feedback. The feedback given was perhaps the context and scenario I had taken was quite dark and dystopian and perhaps to make it lighter or more positive.

I also received feedback that I was doing too many things and I should scale down my survival map to not the whole of Singapore but rather just a small area.

 

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